Phoebe was inspired this week by a video she watched and wrote this poem to express those feelings. I think both the poem and the poet are amazing.
The Demon on the Shoulder
A poem
To all the people who struggle with negative self-thoughts.
The Demon on the Shoulder is a pesky thing indeed,
It creeps right in, unwanted, as intrusive as a weed.
No one cares. It whispers. They’re all laughing behind your back.
You thought they loved you? Think again.
Go try and talk to them, they’ll only complain.
But you don’t have to listen,
to that ugly little gremlin.
Instead, try and hear that Still Small voice.
Good job! You’ve done it! I knew you could.
You deserve to be loved, you deserve a choice!
Now I won’t lie, it won’t be easy.
And if you listen to the demon, you’ll always feel quite queasy.
But with a bit of strength, hope, and faith,
You’ll get right through.
Just like we always knew.
You are loved.
Because you are you.
7 comments:
I absolutely love your poem and thoughts Phoebe. You have so much wisdom for your age. Your poetry skills are remarkable. If it’s okay with you, I’d like to print this, frame it, and keep it by my work desk where I keep my treasured thoughts and pictures of people I love most. Hugs.
Amazing! 🥰
Phoebe you are amazing. You have a beautiful, spirit. I love the poem and I love you.
Nana Shari, thank you so much! Yes, you may print it and frame it. Hugs back!
Nana Cris, thank you!! 😊
And Grandma Bonnie, thank you! I love you too!
I love you all, thank you for your kind words, they've really boosted my confidence.
I love it! Thank you Phoebe ❤️
Great job. You’ve captured the negative self talk beautifully. You’ve also caught the positive spirit. You can do it: it won’t be easy. Total positivity isn’t true. Honest optimism is inspired. Amazing insight.
This is fantastic! Such a good reminder.
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